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Have you ever Melted into life?

I have one question I must ask you all
Have you ever felt a wondrous glow
It is something oh, so wonderful
It touches one and forces him to grow
It helps the breath of God bring in the silence
That brings upon us stillness in the air
It takes one far away from any violence
As you find beauty it is everywhere

Have you sat amidst the trees, and flowers
And felt the morning breeze caress your skin
Have you felt the magic and the power
And felt a symphony in you begin
As the birds sing out their morning song
And you sit beneath a Banksia tree
Do you get a feeling you belong?
As you melt into life's mystery

Have you ever sat there all alone
Away from all the many kinds of din
It’s lovely to just sit there on one’s own
It’s perfect their for looking deep within
Have you ever melted into life’s sweet joy
And let the stillness open your heart wide
There is nothing this beauty can destroy
Everything it seems is deified

17 December 2018

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Date: 12/30/2018 5:32:00 PM
This lovely poem makes the phrase "take time to smell the flowers" to a higher level Peter! It lifted my spirits and took me on a peaceful journey with you. Thank you my friend. Happy New Year and welcome to becoming a New Premier Member of Poetry Soup! Blessings, Connie ; ) xxoo
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Date: 12/30/2018 5:51:00 PM
G'day Connie. It is always so very nice to hear from you. I'f my simple writing can lift the spirits, then I am glad to have created them. I appreciate your kind words, so much, my friend. I hope you have a wonderful new year and have a good celebration tonight. All the best.... Peter
Date: 12/18/2018 11:36:00 PM
Hello Sidney, I took a read here of a second poem of yours with the emotive question your present: Have you ever melted into life? This one is truly a superb poem, and a definite FAVE in my book. Over time I shall read more of your poetry. I already sense a type of quite passion with a mix of emotive and reflective thoughts that make what you say and write about all the more compelling and fascinating to read. Most Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 12/19/2018 5:03:00 PM
Hi Gary. The least I can do is write from my heart and let my feelings pour out. I thank you for your kind comments, my friend. I sincerely appreciate your kind comments, my friend. I hope you and your lady have a beautiful Christmas...Peter
Date: 12/17/2018 4:38:00 PM
My answer to your question, sidney is yes..a long long time ago, but your wonderful poem, took me right back, and for that thanks...for posting..Oh by the way the captcha is AUS, appropriate i think..
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:50:00 PM
Hi Harry, there are people on this site who I can see what I see. it tends to put joy in ones life that cannot be destroyed. Great Captcha Aus is a fine place to be. I thank you for your kind comments, my friend. Have a wonderful Christmas...Peter
Date: 12/17/2018 9:54:00 AM
Takes a very rare soul to melt into life and into painting scenes with poetry as you so wonderfully do my great friend! Reading this gem has set my day on a positive and very inspiring note. Thank you! A fav,...
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:41:00 PM
Hi Robert. I, like you write only what my heart tell me to. I cannot write trivia like most do and this is what I admire about your writes. You put everything into them with all your sincerity. Most of the people on this site just want to write in words that one has to work out and which a simple man like myself cannot understand. My poems tell most people what they cannot absorb. Thank you so much for your kind comments, my friend...Peter
Date: 12/17/2018 12:40:00 AM
- This peace and stillness is important for both the heart and soul :) - A beautiful poem I wish you and Vera a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:44:00 PM
So True Anne Lise. This world is in a mess because most people are out of touch with the heart and soul. Thank you, my friend for your kind comments. I hope you have a beautiful Christmas...Peter