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Happy Birthday

last summers vacation was a quite a trip for the first time, I did skinny dip I stripped off all my clothes and struck a quick pose I was hoping my package was equip....

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2011 6:04:00 PM

One brave soul..Interesting work..Don't remeber if I saw this in the contest or not...Thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment..The trip to the chiropractor plus the prayers of all here made a difference..He adjusted my neck..I came home and slept for two hours..Sara

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/18/2011 9:36:00 PM

Very funny Limerick...Jimmy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2011 8:54:00 PM

har, har, har, rick! were you a hottie?? best of luck! :) hugggs, nette

Diane Locksley

Date: 1/18/2011 7:52:00 PM

Oh, this is really funny, Rick! Thank you for making me laugh.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 7:10:00 PM

Rick, VERY funny idea this one has. And I sure got the title meaning! LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2011 6:32:00 PM

silly man now remove this naughty limirick we on on to ANIMAL LIMIRICKS for CHILDREN..LOL and hum.. da DUM da/ da DUM da/ da DUM da/ Light & Love

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2011 6:28:00 PM

lol! Good one. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2011 4:46:00 PM

VERY funny, Rick. Terrific Limerick!! I thought Deb's newest contest was for children's poems about animals. Maybe I'm confused. Anyway, I'm sure your package was "equip" just fine in the photo. LOL Love, Carolyn