Haiku Viii

red-winged blackbird clings to yellow mustard in breeze Belgium flag colors

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/31/2023 6:57:00 AM

I have a great picture of “my red-winged blackbird” with my poem “Passerine Sentry” The better poems are “A Flower With Wings” and “The Untouchables” I stopped after taking his photo to write down what kind of bird he was (he was protecting the mama and nest) I felt his wing across my back and moved on. Hugs ~ Kim

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/31/2023 5:13:00 PM

Yes, birds are so cool to write about, especially when you have a personal encounter with them. Thanks so much for stopping by to read my poems. Carol Louise

Raven Howell

Date: 5/18/2023 3:42:00 AM

Love this haiku! Nice work, Carol!

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/31/2023 5:15:00 PM

Raven, Thank you so much. And look at you with such a cool bird name, Raven! Carol Louise