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Haiku I

how cold heavy snow breaks the tree branch splits the trunk--parents' divorce

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2020 5:55:00 PM
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Very sad, indeed...a feel a brisk breeze.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/22/2020 8:22:00 PM
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Thank you, Kim, for appreciating my haiku. When I was young adult my parent's divorced. I spent years hoping they'd get back together.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/18/2020 3:10:00 PM
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This double forked split works well for you, Carol. Well done! Regards // paul
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/18/2020 4:36:00 PM
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Thanks, Paul.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/26/2020 8:26:00 PM
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yes, the marriage grows cold as ice. Great comparison!!
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 9/26/2020 8:51:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea. I always value your comments. Have a wonderful week.
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 9/24/2020 3:27:00 AM
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extreme hot makes the egg of creation rotten/ extreme love misunderstands the true feelings
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