Haiku 6-17-2011

~ a leaf floats downward dancing with its own shadow resting in one dream.. ~

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/21/2011 2:20:00 PM

So lovely!! Congrats on your win Rick with this very beautiful haiku...gautami

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2011 8:47:00 PM

short forms shine for you, rick! special cheers on your great win!.:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/20/2011 8:32:00 PM

Congrats Rick on another exciting win in the contest with this wonderful write and entry my friend... so awesome like u luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/20/2011 4:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Rick. Lovely haiku! Love, Carolyn

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/19/2011 10:38:00 AM

I have yet to write a good haiku. This one is Great! 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2011 8:00:00 PM

Rick, are you the one I saw PD leave you a challenge somewhere? It looked SUPER hard! (maybe it was someone else) but if you, were you able to do it? Just seeing it,I chickened out on asking her for a challenge of my own. hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2011 1:58:00 PM

A model for lines and shadows? WHy can't I think of something so simple and splendid as this? (its)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2011 1:24:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this creative Haiku..Keep the gifted pen flowing..Sara