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Haiku 6-30-2011

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Edwin Baldwin

Date: 7/10/2011 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations Rick!!! I'll be pondering on those swirling seeds with good intent.This is a profound and spiritually intuitive haiku

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 11:51:00 AM

Enjoyed reading ...Congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2011 10:23:00 PM

wow, rick..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/9/2011 8:09:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on the win...what a superb words penned in this poem..well-said ideas....*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 3:53:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty my friend.. luv that last poignant line luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 12:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ^Rick in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 7/9/2011 11:25:00 AM

Wonderful job Rick! Congrats to you :)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/9/2011 10:28:00 AM

Wonderful take on the contest photo.Congrats Rick on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/9/2011 9:07:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Rick

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2011 9:05:00 AM

Rick, whirlpool without end, Congratulations and Thanks for your support of this effort. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2011 8:52:00 AM

Many congrats, Rick : )

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/3/2011 8:39:00 PM

Very nice short poem! Peace and blessings Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/1/2011 12:22:00 PM

Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today ^Rick. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Cory Long

Date: 6/30/2011 7:35:00 PM

very powerful words you have here. good luck in the contest. cory