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Haiku 5-27-2011

puddle of spring rain reflects beauty in each drop lighting shatters glass

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Date: 5/31/2011 6:42:00 PM
a very good haiku, I think, that last line is the punch that makes it and Rick, I want to thank you so much for my placement in your Sijo contest, with my poem, And I Dreamt A Child's Dancing Dream, I am very honored and thrilled, looking forward to your next challenge~~
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:05:00 AM
That would be scary..Enjoyed reading this creative work..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2011 11:10:00 PM
Excellent imagery here Rick.Liked it...
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Date: 5/27/2011 8:09:00 PM
nice haiku like the last line really cool
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