Haiku 4102017

her worn book of faith in twilight memorandum easter lilies sway __________ 04/10/2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/2/2018 12:45:00 PM

This haiku is really good, Rick; could easily have been amongst the top 3. Congratulations on your win. Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2018 10:33:00 AM

Congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/1/2018 8:17:00 PM

Very nice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2018 7:35:00 PM

Very well written haiku, Rick. Congrats in the contest

Eve Roper

Date: 3/1/2018 7:02:00 PM

Imagery is picturesque, Rick, nicely done, congratulations on your win !

Deborah Guenther Beachboard

Date: 3/1/2018 5:56:00 PM

Well written. I feel a sense of sadness and yet there is hope.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/1/2018 5:45:00 PM

Wow - deep imagery. Love it, Rick.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 6:26:00 PM

Well said, Rick, congratulations on your win. ~*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2017 6:03:00 PM

this says SO Much in so few words. Haiku form was ideal for it.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/11/2017 3:47:00 PM

Deep. I need to chew/meditate ... Shalom/Blessings. Anil Deo CONTEST QUESTION: The guidelines said choose one "WORD" from the list below ... did you NOT mean/intend "one line" or "one phrase," rather than a single word in several potential titles? Thanks Rick