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Haiku 318

on my knees a warm breeze through the chapel door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/14/2018 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful haiku.
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Date: 4/13/2018 5:21:00 PM
so beautiful, Rick. Congrats!
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Date: 4/13/2018 9:26:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your win-- you created in just 3 lines a TRUE holy image-- almost like the warm breath of God....
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Date: 4/13/2018 5:11:00 AM
Lovely emotionally charged imagery, Rick. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 3/19/2018 11:34:00 AM
This brings forth all sorts of pleasant imagery. Very nice.
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:49:00 AM
Very good way of showing us a moment of submissiveness.
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Date: 3/18/2018 12:46:00 PM
Charming to imagine the full scene the quaint chapel in my mother's village. Lovely, Rick.
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