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Haiku 3-10-2015

springtime rain pours down - beneath teak crackling boughs we lie in laughter..

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 5:28:00 PM

Rick, I see you win often with Brian and this shows us exactly why. So beautiful it is. Congratulations. (looks like I saw it before 2 years ago)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/7/2017 8:26:00 AM

Neat haiku, Rick congrats or was that cackling boughs.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/16/2015 4:18:00 PM

back to congratulations on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2015 9:46:00 PM

I just love the imagery of joy this creates. Congrats for your great win, Rick.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/12/2015 7:43:00 PM

Obviously, I liked this a lot [spring rain: beneath teak boughs/we lie together] is all you needed Rick - why teak Rick?Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 4/6/2015 9:02:00 AM

Teak is extremely durable

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/12/2015 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations Rick! Hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2015 11:47:00 AM

beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/12/2015 10:59:00 AM

Very nicely done! Grats on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2015 9:55:00 AM

Fun, well described in such a few words a 7 :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 8:18:00 AM

I like it, the ending is fantastic!