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Haiku 2

the eaves drip in song a fresh summer rain falls long.... cool breeze sings along ___________________________ CONTEST

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2011 10:49:00 PM

aha, and here you did a rhyming one!! VEry pretty. I think i had seen it before.I was just seeing your different haiku and it looks like you have a variety of styles, which is very nice!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/21/2011 2:41:00 AM

Warm air is coming soon. I can hear it in your Haiku! Cool stuff. ~JS Lambert

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 8:44:00 AM

Congrats ^Rick on your win!--kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 4:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George

Date: 3/10/2011 1:23:00 PM

Lovely Haiku, Rick. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 3/10/2011 10:49:00 AM

A great pleasure to see you Rick in the top ten winner's circle, with this worthy eighth place Victory. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:33:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest ^Rick. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2011 8:15:00 PM

Love the summer showers..your first line is inspired..congrats. BG

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/9/2011 6:36:00 PM

EXCELLENT! Just what I'd expect from the Haiku Master! RAY

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 5:08:00 PM

Very peaceful. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2011 2:56:00 PM

APPLAUSE for the great win, rick.. nice! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:46:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your super cool win in Carol's contest my friend with this expressive entry ... enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/9/2011 2:37:00 PM

I can just see the water dripping from the eaves. Such a pleasant sound on a summer day. Congratulations on your win, Rick! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 2:36:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Carol, Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 2:20:00 PM

Rick this is super fine!! I could hear the rain drops resounding in that fresh summer air with cool singing breeze. Congratulations. Glad I got to see your entry.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 10:07:00 PM

Lovely rhyme with this haiku. All the best for the contest.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/28/2011 9:49:00 PM

This is about as well as anyone can write a haiku when it tells about a summer rain. This is an overall good job.