Haiku

___________________________ mammoth stones scattered winters fog drifts free below.... lighthouse guides passage ___________________________

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rickon your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:23:00 AM

Hello Rick, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Very well done haiku As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 3:49:00 PM

So good to see you at the top Rick! Congratulations on your worthy poems fourth place honored win! Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 12:25:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Rick. Nice going. Ralph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:15:00 AM

Very nice Haiku here !Congrats ^Rick on your big win in this contest---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2011 8:24:00 AM

I love the simplicity....it says it all !!! Well done, Rick! Congratulations!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:14:00 AM

your first line sure is very descriptive-- enjoyed this interpretation of the photo, Rick :) Congrats on your win :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 7:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:23:00 AM

Congrats Rick my friend on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write .. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/27/2011 3:10:00 AM

beautiful Image.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:09:00 PM

You covered lots of ground succinctly. Congratulations on your top win, Rick.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 9:36:00 PM

Really fine Rick. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 8:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine 4th Place win in my contest, Rick. Thanks for the support. Always, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/24/2011 4:41:00 PM

You have read and covered the whole perspective of the picture with apt images, Rick.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/24/2011 12:01:00 AM

tremendous imagery, rick! :) best wishes in the contest..:) huggs, nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/24/2011 12:01:00 AM

tremendous imagery, rick! :) best wishes in the contest..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 9:57:00 PM

I love the mammoth stones. Exactly described, Rick.