Haiku 1

______________________ haughty clouds exhale brisk air creates winter snow... white crystals blanket ______________________

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2011 7:01:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here!Congrats ^Rick on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:51:00 PM

I sure love that "haughty clouds exhale" line. Very cool, Rick. Congratulations.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2011 8:28:00 PM

lovely imagery you've created, congrats on your win in the contest Rick

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Carol, Rick

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 10:39:00 AM

Hello Rick, Beautiful words you have penned here in this wonderful Haiku Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2011 10:24:00 AM

Beautiful job Rick! It's so great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place victory in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 7:29:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your third place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. full of great imagery and warm lines... enjoy another sweet success with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 7:11:00 AM

White crystal blanket. wow.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest ^Rick. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/25/2011 1:06:00 PM

beautiful and apt images conveying the changes in nature, Rick

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 2/25/2011 10:16:00 AM

I like the idea of haughty clouds exhaling to make snow: )