Haiku - 20

one burgundy leaf fluttering in the green grass - heavy clouds crawl slight ________________________ A Carol Brown Contest "Leaves"

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/15/2011 8:05:00 AM

One burgundy leaf in a gorgeous haiku by you! Just perfect work, Rick.

John Freeman

Date: 10/13/2011 1:31:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your first place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/12/2011 4:38:00 PM

very cool numbering the verse!!! lines 1 & 2 excellent powerfull image! Congrad's Light & Love

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/12/2011 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Nice to see such different entries with this topic. Well done. Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2011 11:05:00 AM

Congrats Rick on another exciting win with this beautiful piece on leaves for the contest my friend...luv..

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/12/2011 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Rick

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/12/2011 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations, Rick on this win in Carol's contest! Hooray for you!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2011 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in my contest "Leaves Leaves Leaves" judged today 10/12/2011. Thank you for your support of my contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Ethan Plummer

Date: 10/5/2011 8:20:00 PM

good luck int the contest