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Sitting on the front porch as September comes calling...

~ summer light fading cold morning air crawls heartless... lonely trees shiver- ~ Contest~ "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 8:25:00 PM

Personification galore here, making it quite unique! congrats on your win, rick.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/4/2011 2:50:00 PM

Congrats Rick! Kim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2011 8:02:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 11:28:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your exciting win with this stunning poetry entry my friend.. lovely..lovely.. luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/3/2011 11:17:00 PM

A postcard image of a solitary tree and cool air like fog edging around its base. Makes me shiver! You are a black belt in Haiku, aren't you? Nice to continue reading your latest works, Rick. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 4:02:00 PM

feeling every line with those shivers Rick... this is why I am a Summer baby ...good luck in the contest with this superb Haiku luv..hope u have been doing well..luv...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/1/2011 3:38:00 PM

goodness rick... what a semi-surreal visual you painted.. beautiful imagery with best wishes! :) huggs, nette