Girl With a Black Eye
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I watch her sitting there, and I'm amazed
that she can grin exultantly. It's clear
she's just engaged in a horrendous fight,
but on her rosy cheeks, there's not one tear.
She looks to be about ten years of age,
this girl with a black eye and bandaged knee.
She sits alone outside the office of
the principal just smiling, worry-free!
She's wearing a disheveled white dress blouse,
brown lace-up shoes, a blue and red plaid skirt,
white socks that, pre-fight, must have come up to
her knees. You know that shiner had to hurt!
Who was the instigator of the brawl
that caused this little girl with braided hair
to wait for her chastisement by a man,
bespectacled and stern? Will he be fair?
I doubt she's bad! She must have been engaged
in fisticuffs in self-defense. Her grin
says "VICTORY!" What does the other kid
who fought look like--the one who didn't win?
*title of 1953 Norman Rockwell painting
February 13, 2019, entered in Line Gauthier's Creativity in Visual
Art Contest
February 23, 2022
entered in Brian Strand's Visual Poetry Contest
Copyright © Janice Canerdy | Year Posted 2019
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