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Folly Upon Dart

A re-hab center on the River Dart Enjoyed the status mark of “upper class” Until the day that standing fell apart -- A Baroness observed a scene so crass; The signage there said, “Please, Keep off the Grass”. July 12, 2017 Form: Quintain Meter: Iambic Pentameter 1st Place English Quintain Contest Sponsored by: Janice Canerdy

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Date: 8/2/2017 2:57:00 PM
Dean, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on 1st place, Dean!
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/2/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Dale! I can't wait to see what others do with your Seasonal Color contest. That was fun. -- Dean
Date: 8/2/2017 9:17:00 AM
Your poem made me smile, Dean - very clever. Congrats on your win.
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/2/2017 10:03:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Agnes. Thank you!
Date: 8/2/2017 5:42:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Dean!
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/2/2017 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 8/2/2017 12:31:00 AM
Dean, CONGRATS on your win. Thanks for entering your great poem in my contest. Janice
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/2/2017 10:01:00 AM
What a surprise! Thank you for taking time to sponsor this fun project. I have written a couple of Quintains since. I can actually say it is growing on me. -- Dean
Date: 7/13/2017 10:11:00 PM
I love this poem, good luck, Dean! :)
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/16/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Allyssa! Just my humble attempt at getting a laugh. Glad you enjoyed it. - Dean
Date: 7/13/2017 8:55:00 PM
hahahaha, love it, good luck in the contest
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/16/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Francine. I hope it made you smile.
Date: 7/13/2017 7:53:00 PM
HA! I really enjoyed this one, Dean.
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/16/2017 2:58:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it. That's why I wrote it, just to make people smile. It means a lot coming from you. - Dean
Date: 7/13/2017 2:46:00 PM
Love it , good luck in the contest .
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/16/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Eve! Glad you enjoyed it. I don't count this amoung my best work but it was fun!
Date: 7/13/2017 1:48:00 PM
Oh the nerve! LOL! Nice one, Dean!
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/16/2017 3:00:00 PM
Glad you got a kick out of it. Thanks for taking time to comment. - Dean
Date: 7/13/2017 1:44:00 PM
LOL Good one Dean. Good luck in the contest :)
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/16/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Heidi. We'll see how it goes. I'm not really expecting much from the contest. It was just an experiment with this new (to me) form. - Dean