Fog

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Fog distorts misty eyes Bleak sight, haunted skies ~ Eerie clouds, lay low Where phantom headlights glow.

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Gary Radice

Date: 11/30/2023 9:35:00 AM

I love that last line in particular. A great atmospheric free verse Joanna. Cheers - Gary

Joanna Feltham
Date: 11/30/2023 10:30:00 AM

Thank you.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/30/2023 8:22:00 PM

Loved!! God bless you! Love, Gina

Joanna Feltham
Date: 9/30/2023 11:25:00 PM

Thank you. :-)

Sam Scott

Date: 9/13/2023 1:25:00 AM

Fog is so atmospheric and exciting. This captures the ghostly qualities succinctly. I have wanted to write a poem about giants appearing from the mists (inspired by drive from Sheffield), as pylons appear through the fog and mist. This might just inspire me to :)

Sam Scott
Date: 9/17/2023 7:48:00 PM

Done :) via SoupMail

Sam Scott
Date: 9/13/2023 2:20:00 AM

No pressure! ;)

Joanna Feltham
Date: 9/13/2023 1:51:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. I'd love to hear your poem it sounds great. Be sure to share the link once it's written.