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birds in flight confident flutter as wings glide

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/28/2023 5:49:00 PM

Lovely photo to match with your lovely poetry, my dearest friend. Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:55:00 AM

thank you! you're so kind, hugs, me

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2023 5:13:00 AM

Your poem brings forth their flight for the reader. Beautifully, descriptive!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 8:44:00 AM

thank you for your visit and for your observation about my words. I much appreciate your enthusiastic support. Have a great day, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/27/2023 6:09:00 PM

Very nice

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 4:28:00 AM

awww...thank you! enjoy your day, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/27/2023 5:35:00 PM

Dear Sara, in your exquisite portrayal, you captured the graceful and assured movement of birds soaring through the air, their wings effortlessly gliding.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 5:49:00 PM

thanks for stopping by this evening, dear Sotto. Your gracious complimentary words touched me. I was hoping to capture birds in flight like a slow motion camera does. Hopefully, I did. I had fun writing it, though. Hope you have a wonderful evening, your poetess friend, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 11/27/2023 4:54:00 PM

Beautiful!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/27/2023 5:18:00 PM

thank you, kind Paige...have a pleasant evening, Sara