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Smiling at fatherhood’s expected visitation and responsibility’s challenging salutation it came as a freebie great joy to a newbie turning back now, an absolute abomination.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/6/2017 10:34:00 PM
An angel. Congratulations!
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 3/6/2017 3:44:00 PM
I bet many people can relate to this experience, Funom! Parenthood comes with a mixed baggage! Well done for a very good limerick. Regards // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 3/5/2017 12:57:00 PM
- So cute ... a real heartbreaker, Funom :) - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 3/5/2017 9:35:00 AM
How beautiful...congratulations
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much

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