Feeling of Being Watched

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THE FEELING OF BEING WATCHED Ever had that feeling of being watched, even with the curtains closed So I poked my head through the curtains feeling less than composed Some ginger moggy, it's sitting on my fence with eyes looking ablaze It is pouring down with rain, that darn moggy must be flippin’ crazed it is 10.30 pm you daft crazy moggy have you got nowt better to do Than just staring at my closed curtains like I am your favourite muse I don’t do tin tuna at this time of night and the birdies are fast asleep But; if you could just do some weeding for me, that would be so neat I will be out tomorrow searching for paw prints in the flower beds soil Just in case you have been cheeky enough, to have left a poopy spoil Indiana Shaw . . . *o*

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2020 7:33:00 PM

Hello Indian Shaw i am making this poem my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend.Blessings to you. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2020 2:04:00 PM

Hello Indian Shaw, the more I read it the more I liked it. So made it my fav. Was this ginger cat a stray?I hope it has a home. Are there many cases of the virus where you live? I am just wondering. Stay safe my friend.Enjoy your day.

Indiana Shaw
Date: 7/5/2020 1:15:00 AM

Awww, that so nice of you Darlene, it was an on the spur poem after I looked out of the window and just saw these bright orange eyes, it was the camera without using the flash that picked up the ginger cat, otherwise, I might have had a totally different poem to write about, glad you enjoyed it . . . : )

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2020 2:47:00 PM

Hello Indian Shaw, i love this poem about this cat. I feel like it is talking out loud. I see this cat as a beautiful black cat. This cat has green eyes. Have a nice day my friend. Blessings to you. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2020 2:09:00 PM

Hello Indian Shaw, I am glad that the ginger cat has a home.Oh a black cat to! They would be company for each other. The ginger cat seems to like to visit you. Enjoy your day my friend. Stay safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

Indiana Shaw
Date: 7/5/2020 1:08:00 AM

The ginger cat and her sister who is black both live across the way, and both have been stuck in the house due to the Coranovirus, I think the ginger one was just letting me know she's back . . . : )