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Feather Light

From powder blue sky weightlessly drifting about feather light landing 7/12/15

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/31/2015 12:26:00 PM

Beautiful picture painted with soft blue color ink. Congrats my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/21/2015 3:12:00 PM

So pretty and descriptive , Lee! I can just see the feather flowing delicately downward :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/19/2015 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations Lee, on your win! I love this airy haiku, with lovely imagery so feather light! It's a 7!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2015 1:24:00 PM

I really like this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 7/16/2015 5:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7. Hugs Eve

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/16/2015 11:28:00 AM

very lovely Lee congrats on win hugs 7

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 10:45:00 AM

simply beautiful many congrats Lee:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 7/16/2015 10:11:00 AM

Lee, really lovely 7 , congratulations and thanks for visiting my haiku 13

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/16/2015 9:58:00 AM

I can see a feather floating in the breeze......softly landing, and as soft as your haiku !! Lovely !!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/16/2015 12:34:00 AM

Congrats, Lee!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 11:39:00 PM

can't wait to go to her list now and see which placement you received. Glad it won. I see the congrats and offer you mine as well!

Lee Carter
Date: 7/16/2015 12:16:00 AM

Thank you Andrea : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:17:00 PM

Lee, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Lee Carter
Date: 7/16/2015 12:17:00 AM

Thank you linda : )

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 11:00:00 PM

...and back to say congrats, Lee. Viv x

Lee Carter
Date: 7/16/2015 12:17:00 AM

Thank you viv!

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 10:47:00 PM

Hi Lee:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Lee Carter
Date: 7/16/2015 12:16:00 AM

Thank you SKAT! : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 3:02:00 PM

Hmmm, it makes me wonder what it used to be part of. Maybe the blue bird of paradise!! that would be so nice!! A sweet entry.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 1:46:00 PM

this is a wonderful entry... LINDA

Judy Konos

Date: 7/14/2015 5:16:00 PM

Well that's a winner if there ever was one! Kudos! Great....

Lee Carter
Date: 7/16/2015 12:15:00 AM

Thank you Judy !

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/13/2015 11:49:00 PM

A fabulous write here, excellent............A.M.

Lee Carter
Date: 7/16/2015 12:14:00 AM

Thank you afolabi !

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/13/2015 10:41:00 PM

I can almost reach out and catch it. Lovely, lovely Haiku, Lee. Well done, and all the best for the contest. Viv x

Lee Carter
Date: 7/13/2015 11:07:00 PM

Viv thank you! I'll stop by and see what you've been writing in a bit!

Darlene Gifford

Date: 7/13/2015 6:55:00 PM

You helped us to clearly see that image. Good luck in the contest~~~Darlene

Lee Carter
Date: 7/13/2015 11:06:00 PM

Thank you Darlene and thanks for stoping by!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/13/2015 10:12:00 AM

You used the power of implied imagery. I like this, Lee. Gl with the contest.

Lee Carter
Date: 7/13/2015 11:05:00 PM

Thank you kim! Nice to hear!