Familia

Children growing Fifteen now New one bows Ages spread Spectrum thread Span the states Schools await Grandpa crowing Family warrants magical Acclaim for achievements Strung, sought, sung compliments Through arts then crafts then too Niche efforts ringing true Actors, painters, playwrights Songstress crooning delights Shunning any theme practical

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2022 3:55:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your winning work. Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. It is always interesting to see in which direction that a child goes to find their talent/s. I see yours have very diverse gifts. Sara

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/22/2022 6:21:00 PM

Children grow into their talents and personalities. A wonderful thing to watch. Thanks 4 stopping by and commenting , Miss Sara. ~:o)

Charles Messina

Date: 10/18/2022 4:11:00 PM

Awesome writing, Arlo. You really did well with this form. Congratulations on your win in my contest and thanks for entering your wonderful poem! All the best, Charlie

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/22/2022 6:23:00 PM

Difficult piece to fashion in the form you presented. Thanks for recognizing my crude efforts in your Contest, Charles. ~;o/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2022 8:11:00 PM

You sure did an interesting one for the contest. Very well done in a difficult form to write in!

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/9/2022 9:18:00 PM

An absolute brain drain, AD. Good luck with yours. :-)