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A restful slumber I did fall drifting in blues and greens I stepped into unconscious consciousness expanding in spirit I flew

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Date: 11/28/2018 4:36:00 AM
slumber! drowsy on the lazy eyes and body /// blues are in green with dream...//// lovely poem
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:15:00 PM
good one!! Thanks again for your support. I do enjoy your works also.
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Date: 4/22/2010 3:30:00 PM
a dream if one could. john
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Date: 4/21/2010 10:26:00 PM
A well expressed poem. I like it
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Date: 4/21/2010 6:51:00 PM
Compelling reference to the "unconscious consciousness," Rick. This is sort of like the alpha state we enter before we drift off to sleep. Geniuses are said to have many moments of brilliance at these times. Let me join you -- we'll fly! Love, Carolyn
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