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July 10, 2023, placed 2nd in the Joseph May Choose a Line Contest

 

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This June through August romance must succumb to time. Each feels the silence closing in. They know the end is coming, yet feel numb. They dread relinquishing what might have been. A thousand miles apart, they reminisce. Although they’d vowed to keep in touch, they know long-distance romance seldom ends in bliss; and time, as well as distance, is a foe. Beyond the silence of summer’s end loom pleasures and demands of freshman year. At college two young hearts begin to mend, as to their chosen pathways they adhere. ******************** A few years pass. Again, it’s summertime. As autumn beckons, two who parted ways as teens just married. They find life sublime. They beat the odds and bask in love’s warm rays.

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Date: 7/22/2023 6:31:00 AM
From its beginning to the mend, A tale without loose Ends.' Well wrote/written, i quote' of two souls by love really smitten.' Well done Janice.!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/22/2023 5:33:00 PM
Joe, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 7/12/2023 3:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win Janice, luke the flowers the summer romance fades, Very micely penned
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/22/2023 6:03:00 PM
Joseph, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Date: 7/10/2023 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love this write/story. Is it you??? Have a great day writing away.....................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/10/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula! No, it's not about me. Janice :-)
Date: 7/10/2023 9:48:00 AM
Nice poem. Great win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/10/2023 1:04:00 PM
Thanks, Jay. Janice :-)
Date: 7/7/2023 12:23:00 PM
A very poignant story of young love and the challenges of time and distance, but glad there is a happy ending for this :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/8/2023 5:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle. Janice

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