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Downpour

the lightning flashing the booming of the thunder torrential downpour

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Karen Croft

Date: 9/14/2023 9:02:00 PM

I love a good rain storm! Have a great day my friend!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/14/2023 9:13:00 PM

Thank you, Karen, I'm enjoying my day. Good to see you posting more these days. :-) Hugs, Bill

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/25/2023 9:53:00 AM

Good haiku, Bill. I actually love it when we get these little torrents here...probably because they don't last very long in my part of town.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/25/2023 9:58:00 AM

Same here, Jim. Thanks for the visit and comment. Have a great week! Bill

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 6/23/2023 6:36:00 PM

Bill I was down in Houston this past Wednesday and I would agree that was some lightning storm! Very well pend sir! Regards A.S.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/24/2023 6:39:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and comments, Anonomus. It's still storming off and on up here outside of Dallas. Have a great weekend my friend. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2023 11:59:00 AM

I really like this one's imagery. Thanks for all your sweet comments on my poems recently

Bill Baker
Date: 6/22/2023 2:08:00 PM

Touche, however it's spelled. lol I yet to read a poem of yours that I didn't like and enjoy reading. Write On! Bill

Valsa George

Date: 6/18/2023 8:48:00 PM

We are experiencing the same now with the arrival of the first monsoon rains. Once it strengthens, there won't be lightning or thunder. Beautifully written Haiku, dear Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/19/2023 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Stay dry my friend. :-) We need the rain, but the hail is damaging and not wanted. I hope your week is filled with joy. Bill

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/18/2023 3:12:00 PM

what a blessing that can be, when we need it so

Bill Baker
Date: 6/19/2023 7:44:00 PM

Yes, we need the rain here in Texas, so a blessings. I just don't like the hail. Thanks for the comment, Vie. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 6/14/2023 3:03:00 PM

I'm someone who loves storms. Nicely done!

Bill Baker
Date: 6/14/2023 7:46:00 PM

Interesting Paige. Thanks for the comment my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

John Lawless

Date: 6/12/2023 8:44:00 PM

and me without an umbrella......

Bill Baker
Date: 6/13/2023 5:03:00 PM

Yep, me too, John. Never seem to be prepared for Texas weather than changes on a dime. Thanks for the visit and comments my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Michael Tor

Date: 6/12/2023 6:29:00 PM

Love your words Bill perfectly picked to share a rushing storm. Reminds me of Florida, it really pours there... Thanks for sharing...

Bill Baker
Date: 6/13/2023 5:02:00 PM

Hi, Michael. Thanks for the visit and comments my friend. I hope all is well as you begin to experience retirement. It takes a while to get used to the changes. Have a great week! Bill

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 6/11/2023 9:00:00 AM

I love rain, and thunder and lightning during a wet monsoon storm is always kind of fun, if the lightning doesn't strike too close!! One day my daughter and grandkids were at my house during a storm, the kids were scared our house would be struck. My daughter consoled the children, it probably won't strike too close. As soon as she spoke, a tree in my neighbor's yard was struck, and a huge branch fell off! So, it can be really scary! I love your Haiku :)

Bill Baker
Date: 6/11/2023 9:41:00 AM

I agee, BJ, we need to be prepared for the extremes. I like hearing the rain and the smell of fresh air after a shower, just not the storms. Thanks for the comments my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/10/2023 7:36:00 PM

Powerful images are conveyed by this awesome haiku, enabling one to feel the thrill of the storm, without getting wet.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/11/2023 9:43:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Evelyn. Rain can be quite enjoyable. Thanks for the comments my friend. Bill

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/10/2023 7:32:00 PM

There is something soothing and refreshing about rain that is very comforting until nature surprises us and it changes into a fierce storm. Good health and happiness to you and your wife, Bill. Thank you, for your kind comments. Take care, Shirley

Bill Baker
Date: 6/11/2023 9:39:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and comments, Shirley. Health and Happiness to you too my friend. Bill

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/10/2023 12:01:00 PM

Great, Bill.! Where I live there is no thunder! OK by me, lightning scares the pants off of me as is.)) Chicago had enough thunder as it was..I love to walk in the rain on a summer night without an umbrella…without lightning or thumper. Best shower in the world Chicken Little Pangie

Bill Baker
Date: 6/10/2023 2:00:00 PM

A walk in the rain can be quite soothing. I like rain, just not thunder, lightning and Hail. Thanks for the visit my friend. Have a pleasant weekend, Pangie. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/10/2023 10:11:00 AM

Perfect haiku, It's June and we still have rain in Sunny Malta.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/10/2023 1:50:00 PM

Nice, we're getting storms with lightning and hail. Not good. Thanks for the visit and comment Victor. Enjoy you weekend my friend. Bill

Judy Ball

Date: 6/10/2023 8:01:00 AM

Ahhh! A good drenching rain. Love it. Especially at night. As Bobby Goldsboro used to say: "I love a rainy night" Good stuff here Bill. God Bless, JB

Bill Baker
Date: 6/10/2023 8:07:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Judy. I love a rainy night too. lol Have a great weekend my friend. Bill

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/10/2023 4:04:00 AM

I like the rain... blessing to read. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Bill Baker
Date: 6/10/2023 6:31:00 AM

Thanks for the comment, Gina. We need rain for the flower to grow. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2023 8:23:00 PM

I feel it! Well done, Bill!

Bill Baker
Date: 6/10/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thanks for the comment, Kim. Have a pleasant day my friend. Bill

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/9/2023 7:34:00 PM

There's something magical, exciting and sensual about a heavy downpour. (I think so, anyway). You've painted such a vivid picture with your words. I say, "bring on the rain". I enjoyed this very much, my friend from Texas. :) Hugs, Brandy

Bill Baker
Date: 6/10/2023 6:29:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and comments, Brandy I agree with your thoughts on rain and sensual. Have a great weekend my friend. Hugs, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/9/2023 1:58:00 PM

Oh, Bill, your exquisite observations and vivid descriptions masterfully conveyed your musings. The sound of the heavy rain is almost palpable in your splendidly crafted haiku.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/9/2023 3:03:00 PM

I like the rain, just not more than an inch or two at a time. Thank you for reading my poetry, my friend. Will visit your poetry soon. Bill

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/9/2023 4:54:00 AM

Hello Bill. Good Morning. Your entry is in true form along with voice and tone. I have much respect who write and master this format that has a style all its own. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a beautiful morning and weekend. Blessings now and always. (smile)

Bill Baker
Date: 6/9/2023 7:17:00 AM

Thank you for commenting on my poetry, Lisa. May your days be filled with peace and insights. Sincerely, Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2023 3:11:00 AM

Glad you got some rain. Awesome. Dry here now. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/10/2023 12:50:00 AM

I have seen on TV where their has been flooding in parts of the state though. Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 6/9/2023 12:36:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Sara. We'll take all we can get in Texas. :-) Have a pleasant day my friend. Bill

David Mchattie

Date: 6/8/2023 4:20:00 PM

That was last night in a nutshell. What a downpour and the lightning storm was something to see. A few more forest fires I suspect. Well penned my friend. Stay well.

Bill Baker
Date: 6/8/2023 4:52:00 PM

First visit to my poetry. Welcome and come back often so we can be friends. Thanks for commenting on my poetry, David. I'll visit yours soon. A poet in Texas, Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/8/2023 3:24:00 PM

Hello Bill, I enjoy to listen to the thunderstorm in the evening. I find it relaxing. It is a soothing sound. /My poet friend enjoy your evening. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/9/2023 4:08:00 AM

Hello Bill, It is going to rain today. So it will be relaxing for me. My poet friend. Enjoy your day./Darlene\

Bill Baker
Date: 6/8/2023 4:50:00 PM

I enjoy the rain also, my friend Darlene. Thanks for stopping by and for commenting on my poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill