Dogs and Squirrels

the squirrel sensed danger quickly it ran up the tree helpless, the dog barked

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/22/2022 8:24:00 PM

Funny! And I read it like this. 'Helpless' the dog barked. I.e., 'Helpless' is the dog's name! Nyuk, Nyuk ~ Moe, Curly and Larry

Bill Baker
Date: 1/22/2022 11:01:00 PM

Hey, that works for me, but messes with my syllable count. lol Have a great day, Bill

Karen Croft

Date: 1/22/2022 1:35:00 AM

love it. these are my dogs exactly!!

Bill Baker
Date: 1/22/2022 12:02:00 PM

They do seem to enjoy chasing and barking at squirrels. lol Glad they're active and playful. Have a great day~ Karen! Bill

Eve Roper

Date: 1/21/2022 5:40:00 PM

great image, Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 1/22/2022 12:01:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill