Dire

a somber willow defeated in the drought year ambivalent hope....

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 12:00:00 PM

:):) SKAT...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/5/2010 5:18:00 PM

Nice haiku expressing a nice thought with apt images

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2010 4:33:00 PM

Drought is ruff on willow for they need much water...The good thing is you can root a new one from the limbs in the spring of the year...I hope that it makes it....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2010 4:31:00 PM

Pondering words for your Haiku Rick and feel for the somber willow .. we expect rain tonight for our thirsty trees... there is ever hope.. very creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2010 3:32:00 PM

Keep the hope alive, Rick. Had a crepe myrtle that stood leafless like a stick for 10 years, transplanted it and two days later the leaves started to emerge. I hope the same can be done for the willow. They are beautiful trees. Such a well-penned haiku! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2010 3:29:00 PM

a wonderful, and delighted read, have a nice one,..p.d.