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The day grows old. The sun slowly sinks down beneath the tops of the trees. The fog casts beams of moonlight into sepia tones. The path before my feet feels like an invitation to my soles, as if it wanted me to travel it and find out what lay upon it. I venture forth, walking in silence, the snow crunching under my feet. My footfalls become my heartbeat, and my sight becomes a sense of wakeful dreaming. The woodland has become the most beautiful of photographs. The trunks of fallen trees bare icicles almost as long as my hand, no two of them the same—more enchanting than any work of man. Every twig and blade of grass grows winter "leaves" of ice crystals, and the frost is deeper than the fleece in my gloves.
I walk in silence under the light of full moon my thoughts are as full behind the snow clouds peeks the bright December moon shows its pristine face

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Date: 12/1/2023 8:47:00 PM
Loved it!!!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 4:36:00 AM
thanks for hiking with me!
Date: 12/1/2023 4:49:00 AM
Walking is a wonderful thing as so is this poem, Sara. The ice crystal leaves is a fantastic image. A wonderful way to look at a wonder of Nature. Do you already have snow in your part of Texas? Brrrr... Thanks for always writing
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/1/2023 4:58:00 PM
Hi Jeff! Thanks for stopping by and for your kind words. I agree, walking is a wonderful thing, well except maybe when it's not raining. No, we don't have snow yet. Hopefully, we won't for some time. I wrote this poem remembering the snow of last winter...in February I believe. Thanks for consistently visiting and reading my poems. Have a splendid weekend. Sara
Date: 12/1/2023 4:25:00 AM
The onset of winter is so beautifully painted. We don't have the pleasure of watching snowflakes gently falling as we live in a tropical region. In the snowy night, watching the full moon is a delight. The sculptures carved by nature supersede all man made arts. Sara, I love your language and love the descriptions of your stroll through nature.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/1/2023 4:32:00 AM
thanks, sweet Valsa, for your kind and poetic words. You're right, watching a full moon on a snowy night is a delight, and as you said, better than manmade artistic works. Nature is awesome to watch no matter the region. We once lived and worked in the desert southwest...no snow but the crystal clear nights with the moon rising over the nearby mountains was breathtaking. Have a wonderful day, Sara
Date: 11/30/2023 11:18:00 AM
thoughts as full as the moon, I liked it, well written Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/30/2023 5:09:00 PM
thank you, Clive, for hiking with me :-) I appreciate your visit and kind words, enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 11/30/2023 9:36:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning dear sara as always, i especially love how unique your way of painting imagery is, and delicately they flow throughout. My fave lines in tbis are “ My footfalls become my heartbeat, and my sight becomes a sense of wakeful dreaming. “‘so soul touching. This is truly a magical poem. That i enjoyed reading, every word is special and has your signature style carved. Sending you light always.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/30/2023 5:11:00 PM
thank you, dearest Ink, for visiting my poem. I appreciate your kind words about my flowing imagery. I'm grateful you found my words magical and soulful. The 'my footfalls' is also my favorite line. Thanks for your positive words and feedback. Have a splendid evening and weekend, hugs, Sara
Date: 11/30/2023 7:12:00 AM
Love the imagery, especially this line.. The fog casts beams of moonlight into sepia tones... You should write a book on haibuns and call it the queen of haibuns... You set the scene, tell a story and then finish it off with two great haikus... excellent as always..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/30/2023 5:12:00 PM
thank you for that brilliant idea, Silent One!! That title is catchy, and I like it. I appreciate your visit and your enthusiastic and kind words. Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 11/30/2023 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful images you convey Sara--under the peeking full moon. Splendid nature walk!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/30/2023 6:26:00 AM
awww, thanks Vijay, for joining me on the nature walk. Glad you found the images beautiful. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/30/2023 4:39:00 AM
this is another lovely wintry haibun - i am in awe of your productivity! such a prolific writer, and always of high quality :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/30/2023 5:10:00 AM
thank, Charlotte, for stopping by and for your kind and complimentary words. I guess I have been rather productive lately...maybe not so much so once the holiday season truly kicks in. Have a pleasant day, Sara

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