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Cup of Contentedness

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The November sun brings brightness to the day, taking center stage as the blooms of the summertime become a part of the soil. The sunshine and cold somehow warm even when the north wind bites. There will be days I wish to stay in the warmth of my home, to observe from a duvet, fingers wrapped snuggly around a steaming cup of hot cocoa. Somedays, though, November takes my hand and shows me its beauty, that in truth, it is but the dawn of spring. cup of hot cocoa soft sweater, contented heart my friend, November

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/30/2023 4:24:00 PM

Hello Sara. This is soft gentle quiet and so peaceful. Yes, contentment. Nice touch by you with incorporating a soft sweater. That gave completeness to the tranquil moment in time. You leave us with imagery. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent and positiveness. May you and Bill have a beautiful night filled with blessings and peace. Please say hello and that I have not forgotten his page. (smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/30/2023 5:04:00 PM

awww...thank you, Lisa, for your kind words. I'm grateful you found my poem soft, gentle, and peaceful with my imager. I'm so grateful for your visits as is Bill. We wish you a peaceful evening! Blessings and hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/7/2023 3:36:00 PM

Dear, Sara, You have shown great talent and insight in writing this haibun. The intriguing blend of November's cold and warmth creates a fascinating month. Imagine the pleasure of sipping a steaming mug of tea on a chilly morning in November. Even in my present condition due to medical ailments, your haibuns never fail to boost my mental state.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/8/2023 4:34:00 AM

thank you, dearest Sotto, for acknowledging my blooming talent and insights. I agree, November is a fascinating, transitional month. I'm glad my haibuns boost your mental state. Ongoing medical conditions can wear on a person's mental state. I've been there, and recently. Sending you encouraging vibes for improved health and a comforting, poetic e-hug, Sara

Deb M

Date: 11/7/2023 1:17:00 PM

Very sweet and oh so cosy Sara….Lovely! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 3:07:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Deb, and for your thoughtful words. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2023 6:15:00 AM

You take us to quiet moments of joy! … to observe from a duvet, fingers wrapped snuggly around a steaming cup of hot cocoa. Hugs ~ Kim

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 3:07:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Andrea, and for wrapping yourself in the warmth of my poem. Grateful for you and your visits, hugs, Sara

Valsa George

Date: 11/7/2023 3:32:00 AM

November is a beautiful month, neither too chilly nor warm. A steaming cup of tea will greatly delight us on a cold November morning! As ever, your haibuns lift my mood even though I am down with a fever right now. Have a happy time dear Sara !

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 4:07:00 AM

thanks for stopping by Valsa. Your thoughts warmed my morning. Sorry to hear you're under the weather but am glad my poem lifted your spirits. Take care today, blessings, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 11/7/2023 12:14:00 AM

A cozy poem creating warm fuzzy feelings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 4:08:00 AM

thanks, Karen...your words are kind. Enjoy your day, Sara

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 11/6/2023 11:49:00 PM

Yes November is the start of bedding down, settling in and getting comfy

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 4:08:00 AM

well said, Clive, and wise. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 11/6/2023 9:34:00 PM

Every month from what ive read through your words, i see you befriending different shades of nature. Your way with expressing gratitude and showing appreciation for little things is soul warming truly! Theres a delicate softness and seamless flow to these lines, i love the picture youve used and also hot cocoa sounds lovely! Its my fave too! I realy love the title and so many lines in this haibun! One of my faves again! “ last lines in the haibun is so deeply artistic! impeccable! Stay blessed

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 4:13:00 AM

dearest Ink--your complimentary words and comments touch my heart. Thanks for your observations about my poems. You're right...I learned to appreciate little things from my dad...he was always content, whistling around the house. Glad to know you like hot cocoa! Thanks for faving my poem...you mean a great deal to me, hugs Sara

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/6/2023 8:16:00 PM

Sara, this poem by relating November as a friend, becomes a relatable, cozy friend I read…just wishing for some cocoa! Haha, i just sent Jim to see if we have some…see what you inspiredvin your delighted reader?

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 4:11:00 AM

thanks, Sally, for your delightful comments. I hope you and Jim had that cup of cocoa. I think I'll make some for breakfast. Have a pleasant November day, hugs, Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2023 6:59:00 PM

My friend, November. The cool is has slowly creeped in, but it seems the warmth does not want to release its clutches. Loved your Haibun

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 4:09:00 AM

thank you, Eve, for stopping by. I'm always grateful for your visits and your supportive words. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/6/2023 6:34:00 PM

Every month can be our friend, if we learn to appreciate what it has to offer, hot cocoa sounds good, that is what we had today, while beginning some decoration for the holiday, hubby and I, love this :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/7/2023 4:10:00 AM

ahhh...such a beautiful response. I agree with your words...hot cocoa..Yum! Holiday decorations...hooray. Glad you and your hubby both liked this poem. Enjoy the season, hugs, Sara