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Crayon Box Dreams

Small wax sticks wait in their neat, bright row, A simple paper lies out on the table. With happy hands, new pictures then will grow, A brand new world, both sweet and truly fable. A green hill rises, and a sky of blue, A yellow sun shines brightly in the air. Each color holds a promise, fresh and true, No worries found, no burdens that to bear. A quiet joy fills up the tiny room, As simple strokes transform a blank space whole. No single hint of sadness or of gloom, Just vivid scenes that nourish any soul. So easy, light, the dreaming takes its flight, And pure, bright worlds spring forth in happy light. The Sonnet Poetry Contest Date Judged: 6/12/2025 9:52:00 PM Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley 2nd Place

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Date: 6/15/2025 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Miranda's sonnet contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/15/2025 5:15:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. This trophy will be treasured for a lifetime.
Date: 5/26/2025 3:52:00 PM
I have no idea or old you are or aren't but my comment is based on the perception you're young; you've got it - the poetry calling and ability are apparent throughout this poem and the other I read. I lied, I wished to read one more. This could be tweaked here and there, look and you'll see, but it's a gem of beauty just needing a bit of polish ... CayCay
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Date: 5/25/2025 8:05:00 PM
Oh! Sorry, Katoliko ka ba?
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Date: 5/25/2025 8:03:00 PM
A box of Crayon Dreams, it's very nice, its colors holds a promise fresh n true. In pure, bright worlds spring forth a happy light. I thought of Spring how the flowers bloom on Spring in America. Kwento ka naman about yourself. Kase if u decide na maging Editor ko, diba dapat I know a little bit about u. When is your birthday? R u happily married with kids? Ganon just answer my questions.
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Jacqueline R. Mendoza
Date: 6/5/2025 4:14:00 PM
Happy 58th birthday in advance, next month. Oh u have no kids, same here bcoz I'm not married yet, but have a fiance in Dubai Middle East working as an engineer. How would u get my book? my email is Jackulit517@gmail.com, wala pang bayad ha, no payment yet bcoz I have no money, it's true I'm in America but I'm in poverty. You're not a snob after all, thank you very much!
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/5/2025 3:56:00 PM
I'm more than happy to help you edit your work. I was born July 30, 1967. A former Catholic converted to INC since 1983. Married but no kids. I like your works, they are well-crafted.

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