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Cowboy Hoe Down

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This long awaited date - a hoedown it’s to be shy smiles as we head in we touch hands nervously We allemande left and do-si-do Then head ladies chain and breathlessly we meet in one another’s arms again We swirl in sawdust on the floor to the tune sweet Bye and Bye Evocative is the patter as the gold moon rises high An anticipated moment as the fiddle fades away Your denim and my lace soon lie buried in the hay Sweet echoes of the evening fill passion in the soul Upon the amber straw we both have lost control ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Poets~Andrea Dietrich & Rick Parise Cowboy HOE DOWN 10-27-2014

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Date: 11/5/2014 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations Rick to both of you on a great entry for the Hoedown contest.
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:11:00 PM
superb Rick this is a true hoe down congrats on 1st place ty for entering hugs
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:33:00 PM
many congrats Rick and Andrea:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:20:00 PM
BACK RICK TO CONGRATULATE YOU AND ANDREA ON YOUR HUGE FIRST PLACE WIN!!!!
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:41:00 PM
When two poets of such high caliber unite nothing but magic can occur. BRILLIANT WRITE! Have to fave this masterpiece.
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Date: 10/30/2014 9:01:00 PM
AWESOME, so glad to see it posted. I will post it myself after I get done with some contest posts in the next few days. Thanks so much for inspiring me with the lines that you put down. I never would have thought of doing this one without your inspiration, Rick.
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Date: 10/27/2014 12:07:00 PM
wooohooooo wonderful verse - how I love the passionate ending - great work you two - this will score high! Hugs jan xxx
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