Churned by anothers love

Tonight I read his poem With music dancing through He talked of his awaited love His love for the sweetness of you This poem has completely thrown me Thrown me so out of kilt I realise how bereft I am And full of loss and guilt For I’ve lost my love I had like that We didn’t cherish it too well So now when I read of another’s My heart doth swell and swell I yearn for that deep love again The love that keeps you true The love that keeps you tender The love I had for you I miss you, I’m heartbroken I ache to see our pain My darling I still love you Will I ever know you again

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/20/2021 8:36:00 PM

Sad when the music fades, when the rose withers, when day shifts into the dark night ~ beautifully penned poem, Angela ~ loving ourself, vibrant within, our magnetism, not desire, draws in the right person automatically (sometimes not, as the cynic Oscar Wilde might say)

Angela Tune
Date: 12/21/2021 1:29:00 AM

Ah Thankyou, yes....very much working on that, I was taken aback actually at how much pain was there after reading someone’s else’s poem, very cathartic x

Deb M.

Date: 12/20/2021 3:31:00 PM

Oh Angie ….how so very beautiful touching and sad! Big cuddle for you . Debxx

Angela Tune
Date: 12/20/2021 3:38:00 PM

I will take that big cuddle with gusto! Thankyou Deb x