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by sun-kissed shoreline patiently I cast my line waiting for a catch
Fishing was my family’s go-to, inexpensive recreational sport. Many weekends were spent at the lake checking trout lines for fish or standing on the lake’s shore, casting our lines into the water, waiting for the bobber to bob, hoping to reel in a fish. However, the act of actually fishing wasn’t my idea of a wonderful weekend. In fact, I never actually fished. Oh sure, I liked riding in the boat and being with my family, but I preferred sitting quietly, taking in the aquatic sights and sounds, and reading my book. When my family fished from the shore, I laid a blanket under a nearby tree, again reading a book or writing a story, filling my lungs with fresh air, and taking in the sounds of nature. Back at home, I naturally didn’t participate in gutting and cleaning the fish. The thought of even watching was enough to turn my stomach. When we had a fish fry, I didn’t eat the fish either. I just couldn’t get past the fishy smell; and, as a result, I received a certain amount of old-fashioned ribbing, especially from my younger brother. “Mom, are you sure she’s one of us? Maybe she was adopted!” Although I wasn’t keen on fishing, there was that time I succumbed to teenage pressure and ended up fishing. “Come on. Go with us,” my friend pleaded. “We’ll have fun at the lake! Promise!” “Okay,” I replied, reluctantly agreeing to go fishing with her and her dad. We arrived at the lake at dawn and planted ourselves on the sun-kissed shoreline, casting our lines into the water with nothing more than simple wooden cane poles and bobbers. "What are the chances of me catching any fish,” I thought after standing still for what seemed like forever. I was bored and filled the time gazing out upon the lake taking in the stillness and focusing on the sights and sounds of nature, forgetting to watch my bobber. All of a sudden, my bobber zinged under the water, forcing me to reel in a fish—a shimmering, eight-inch-long perch. “I caught my first fish! I caught my first fish,” I shouted, dancing along the shoreline. I got caught up in the moment and immediately re-baited my hook and cast my line out into the water. By day’s end, I’d caught five more perch. I was elated knowing my catch of the day was worthy of familial accolades. “Finally, I ‘belonged!’,” I said under my breath. Once home with my ‘catch of the day,’ Dad took my picture as proof that I had, in fact, caught fish just like the rest of the family. But my excitement quickly turned to panic, for I’d forgotten Dad’s cardinal rule about fishing. “You catch 'em, you clean 'em. You clean 'em, you cook ‘em; you cook ‘em, you eat 'em," he asserted. “But Dad,” I grumbled, a sense of dread rolling through my stomach. “You know I don’t like to clean fish, and I sure don’t want to eat them.” “No buts,” he replied before turning and walking away. I somehow managed to clean, gut, and filet my fish with only an occasional gag. I successfully prepared the cornbread mix, dipped my fish in the batter, and fried them despite the heavy fish smell permeating Mother’s kitchen. I served the fish to my family along with hushpuppies, mashed potatoes, iced tea, and ketchup. “Wonderful texture,” Dad said after taking his first bite. “Bet you can’t eat a whole fillet,” my younger brother said, taunting me. “Yes I can! Challenge accepted!” I snapped back, stabbing a bite of fish with my fork, dousing it in ketchup, and swallowing it whole. I repeated the process until I’d eaten an entire fillet. With each distasteful bite, I watched him, his eyes widening. He gasped, and his mouth fell open. Then he turned toward Mother and said in a disbelieving voice, “Mom, I guess she wasn’t adopted. She’s one of us after all.”

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Date: 9/22/2023 11:46:00 PM
My family were fisherman all. Fortunately I like fishing and eating fish. I have lake, river, pond, sea and dock fished. My favorite is fly fishing. I love reading the story. It takes me back to my own fishing trips. And it is really well written. All the sights, sounds and experiences explained.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 3:54:00 AM
thank you, Susan, for visiting. I'm grateful you enjoyed the poem and that it stirred some memories for you. It was a fun write for me. Have a great day, Sara
Date: 8/27/2023 2:01:00 PM
Could have been a Haibun, but enjoyable read just as it is, Sara. You Dad sure loved his fishing and I know eating fish of any kind is and was a great challenge for you. Write On! My eastside writing bear. Love and Hugs! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/27/2023 4:25:00 PM
I agree, might have been a haibun...wasn't sure. May change it. Yes, Dad loved fishing but not as much as his family. Thanks for reading and commenting, love and hugs back, Sara
Date: 8/22/2023 9:16:00 PM
You are such a flawless storyteller. Absolutely love the flow and how descriptive this is. Its a thing with my son too. Fishing. And i always have to snap those catch of the day pics haha. So kind of resonates.. i am not so good with fishin maybe because i am so impatient. Anyway i love also how uv started this summer ish poem. So good!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/23/2023 3:12:00 AM
thank you for the wonderful compliment! Thank you for sharing your fishing experiences about your son. My family was incredibly patient so I guess that's why fishing 'fit.' Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 8/22/2023 5:07:00 PM
nice memories indeed, i went fishing too, with my parents, but is was at sea, with "nets" ??? don't liked that very much, i wa s boring sometimes, but memories are always good, thanks
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/23/2023 3:13:00 AM
thanks, Vann. for reading my creation. I'm glad it stirred your own fishing memories. I can imagine fishing with nets would be a different experience. Yes, memories are wonderful. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 8/22/2023 4:03:00 PM
What a great story. it brings many memories to mind. I come from a family of fish eaters: Hamburg, Germany. I love it any way I can get it. I am glad, you are part of your family... as if you never were. But, the joke is poignant and well-deserved. You "done good." And you are, so very blessed. Thank you.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/23/2023 3:17:00 AM
awww, thanks Martin for your wonderful words. I'm of German descent. As a matter of fact, my dad's family migrated to the US from Hamburg. Maybe that's why he loved fishing so much. My mother is also of German descent. She was a Stainbrook (Steinbruchel origingally). My dad's father's last name was Itchen; he had it anglicized shortly after coming to the US. Anyway, that's another story for another day. I learned German and taught German for years. I'm retired now (12 years) and my German is rusty. But anyway here goes, Habt einen schönen Tag! Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/22/2023 3:32:00 PM
What a sweet slice of nostalgia. I dare say this appears to be your niche Sara. Coincidentally, I had catfish for lunch and salmon for dinner today, though I must confess I've never cleaned a fish. Too icky!
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/22/2023 3:41:00 PM
I've written a children's book (a trilogy really) that I'd love to have published someday. My dear friend Maria Williams (on PS) turned the first book into a flip book for me so that was cool. Glad you're here Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/22/2023 3:36:00 PM
You crack me up, Tom! Icky does describe the act of cleaning fish....makes me want to gag to this day. Thanks for reading and commenting. Your observation is spot on. Nostalgia is my forte. I began writing memoir vignettes nine years ago along with a novel finally fulfilling my teenage desire to be a writer. Poetry is new for me, but I'm loving it. Have a great evening :-) Sara

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