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Can'T Sleep

Will a cup of tea And sitting on the settee Tire the restless mind

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Date: 3/29/2023 8:53:00 AM
No, but ten pints of beer, champagne and cheer will send you to sleep, though when you wake up, the headache is severe.
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Date: 3/29/2023 9:13:00 AM
The recipe was for quieting a restless mind, yours creates one that lasts about 2 weeks in my experience (although don't think I've ever had 10 pints as it would probably kill me... Ahh yes, then I'd sleep)
Date: 3/29/2023 5:40:00 AM
Not from my experience anyway -- Write! Write! Write! Awake is your gift. Love your poem. I can relate.
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Date: 3/29/2023 5:42:00 AM
Thanks Joe, I love your enthusiasm :)
Date: 3/29/2023 5:08:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku DD. It is said that tea is not good to be had just before going to sleep. It arrests sleep. I don't know the verity of it.
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Date: 3/29/2023 5:32:00 AM
I ended up just imagining having the tea as I was too cold so went back to bed. It is true as I notice it if I have two cups I can't fall asleep, but I find it soothing in the middle of the night. A bit like a hug (I have a tea called Jam on Toast - slightly sweet and lovely)
Date: 3/29/2023 3:38:00 AM
I love coffee, and I love this haiku!
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Date: 3/29/2023 4:12:00 AM
Haha there would be about 50x more poetry from me if I were to be caffeinated! Thank you for your comment
Date: 3/28/2023 9:47:00 PM
Well, maybe! Nice, DD:)
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Date: 3/28/2023 10:57:00 PM
:)
Date: 3/28/2023 7:10:00 PM
What a restful poem. Think I will go and make a cuppa. Lovely Haiku DD
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Date: 3/28/2023 10:57:00 PM
:)

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