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Can I Have a Delivery Please

Looking at my Chinese menu Can’t make up my mind at all There is too much going on I can smell the spices as I look My stomach is calling strong Make the call before it’s too late Hi, can I have a delivery please What would you like tonight Have not got a clue I will ring you back in a day or two

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/13/2017 7:50:00 PM

Lol! a witty and wonderful write Niall! Lighthearted loveliness. Excellent and enjoyed

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/10/2017 4:51:00 PM

OMG, Niall, you got me laughing here... Lol! You're an amazing poet my friend! Hugs and smiles :)

John Fleming

Date: 11/4/2017 10:37:00 PM

I always feel buoyed-up after reading your poetry, Niall. Loved this one. Why? Because I have just finished chicken and chips I ordered from a local takeaway -- and it was bl..dy awful!! Ordered at 01.30 and it came at 02.40 - stone cold! Never again. Should have done what you did mate -- and put down the phone! My very warmest regards. :) john

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/23/2017 4:21:00 PM

Oh my I know the dilemma. How are you?

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/15/2017 9:10:00 PM

Love it. I so admire humour in a poem. You are an outstanding comedian! Too adorable - it's a fave for me.

Niall Fulham
Date: 10/16/2017 4:27:00 AM

Hi Line , glad you enjoyed my friend ::))) hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/14/2017 8:18:00 PM

Giggles! Cute one Niall, love it :) xomo!

Niall Fulham
Date: 10/15/2017 5:11:00 AM

Hi Maureen , thanks for giggles my friend ;;)))) hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2017 3:21:00 PM

lol I never have any trouble Niall - same thing for me every time... beef with sweet ginger and pineapple, no onions but bamboo shoots and water chestnuts ... it's heaven on a plate!

Niall Fulham
Date: 10/14/2017 4:22:00 PM

Hi Jan , I must try that one lol ' heaven on a plate lol :::)))))hugs