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buff sparrows frolic

~ buff sparrows frolic bouncing on the brittle snow a faint rat-tat plays ~ Kigo ~ Winter Sparrows, from the beautiful state of Oregon. Buff- a Yellow-Brown Color A Debbie Guzzi Contest

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Date: 11/30/2011 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Animal Haiku" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2011 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win.Nicely done.
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Date: 11/30/2011 2:05:00 AM
Rick congrats on your win..David
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Date: 11/29/2011 10:48:00 PM
RICK;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful HAIKU..FOR DEBBIE~ Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Date: 11/29/2011 9:52:00 PM
Oh shucks, now you make me wonder about the rat-tat-- I hope the sparrows got away? Interesting haiku, Rick and super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 11/29/2011 9:42:00 PM
Nicely done, nicely won, Rick. BIg congratulations in the haiku contest.
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Date: 11/16/2011 3:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2011 8:27:00 PM
so did it win, Rick? I need to go see all the winners of this contest. I really like yours. So what do you mean you can't catch me? are you commenting to the same folks that I am commenting to?
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Date: 11/15/2011 7:00:00 PM
awesome one Rick.. sparrows like swans are so interesting to view ..good luck in Debbie's contest.. u are expert in this type of poetry my friend.. thankxx for your eagle eye..luv..
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Date: 11/15/2011 6:16:00 PM
oooh yeah! makes you wonder too..what is rat-tatting! lots of stuff..[brittle branches] might be nice! did you know aliteration,assonance, and consonance are permitted shhhhhhh don't tell! light & love
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