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astound, labored breath the soft, pale grey collared dove, waits for tender hands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/2/2023 8:43:00 PM
A sharp, beautifully structured Haiku. Congratulations! Brian
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/3/2023 12:04:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/25/2023 10:03:00 PM
Lovely:)
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 4/26/2023 5:09:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/25/2023 4:13:00 AM
Stunning along with photo!
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 4/25/2023 9:18:00 AM
Thank you.

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