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Poem petal plumes thoughts bloom as royal roses brain rains silk stanzas Lighting letters age pages with antique soul jazz gestures jokers Minds mutate moonlight rising from rainbow oceans writing from muse hues Penning pearl pendants which shimmer upon heart's neck forever love laced January 6th 2019 Contest: Contest 545, Any Theme, Any Form, Upto A Max Of 20 Lines Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Jim Tidd

Date: 1/12/2019 12:36:00 PM

Methinks this is more of a senryu.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/9/2019 11:21:00 PM

So nice. I am charmed. Best wishes.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/6/2019 4:02:00 PM

I really like how you start each haiku stanza with a double beginning letter sound. That struck me as a terrific way to get the reader to buy into the haiku. Nice write Chantelle, as usual.