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"Boys Cry 2"
The Sons of Fathers The Fathers of Sons God the Father, Son and Holy Ghost Left him alone in Dark Woods to fend off ribbons and tambourines, unholy army Salvation Hosts “As I lay me down to sleep” Close my eyes, "make no sound boy, not one peep" hand to mouth, do not cry "I will sing you Salvation's Lullaby" The Wolf is in his Woods “Be a good boy, do as should Mothers are absent in this neighbourhood, you can stand it, there's a good boy be a Man, just be a Man...shhh, shush now” he whispers, covering mouth with hand The Sons of Fathers The Fathers of Sons God the Father, Son and Holy Ghost Lost his father, a head on, too many New Year’s Eve toasts “As I lay me down to sleep” Momma can’t protect me here comes the Creep, pretend I’m asleep Close my eyes, "make no sound boy, not one peep" hand to mouth, do not cry Another wolf spewing spider webs he don’t lie, he don’t lie momma don't believe me when we play "I Spy" monster's in his bed the door has shut forever in his head Dead Man Walking Dead Man Walking one boy saved, the other one stalking. I spy with my little eye, Spiders scurry, they never lie God the Father, Son and Holy Ghost 2 Boys Cry 1 in Heaven the other, Do or Die (Lovejoy-Burton/Jan 2018) For those children reading, there are those who listen and do believe your story. Luke 18:16
1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_bYLcTjnPA 2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1uYWYWPc9HU 3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TmoeqeYOm60

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Date: 4/4/2018 7:07:00 PM
Powerful poetry ... heart moving imagery, Leanne! Your compassionate creativity knows no bounds. This is a poetic masterpiece. A classic no doubt about it. Love and smiles always.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/4/2018 7:58:00 PM
I try to write with empathy. But how could I possibly know what goes through the minds of these two men. One alive and one dead. I write about things I think I know, but no one really knows what goes on in the hearts and minds of men... or women for that matter. A person tries to understand, to be understanding. I wonder where forgiveness factors into such crimes and how the victims ever forgive and the families of victims ever forgive. Boys Cry 2, just as girls do. Adults around children need to listen, believe and note silence of their children and the children of others, with eyes wide open and awareness of the people around their children, who may be perceived as charming and trustworthy and particlarly those of strangers. Education of children in these matters (and adults) is important from the get go.
Date: 2/1/2018 8:33:00 AM
Wonderfully empathetic write Leanne, I wrote one similar from a childs point of view, called I was just a kid, horrible things sometimes do happen to good kids, your painted the picture with excellence. Rev21:3,4 comforts me!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/18/2018 6:52:00 AM
I am still trying to find your poem "I Was Just a Kid"....must be one of the earlier ones. I will respond when I have found it and read it.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/1/2018 9:11:00 PM
Was a poem for those who suffered not personal!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/1/2018 11:15:00 AM
p.s. John, just wanted you to know. I went to reply to your comment in the Seats of Amygdala poem and I accidentally deleted it. If you'd like to add it in again, I will comment there with my response. If not, Thank you for the kind comment. Leanne
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/1/2018 11:09:00 AM
Thank you John. I am sorry you suffered, if that was you in your poem. I am sorry for all the little children who have suffered sexual abuse, or abuse of any kind. We are here to protect them. Thank you for the bible verse. x
Date: 1/23/2018 7:27:00 AM
You are a great write, this is powerful stuff.. hey, I never cry... I see you had a reference from the bible...
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/12/2018 12:30:00 PM
Yes Leanne. The holy books like Torah, Bible , Quran and other holy scriptures do have very powerful words..........the arabs writers who used to boast of thier language and eloquence became speechless before their holy scripture............
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 1/23/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thank you. Some of the most powerful words and stories are in that book. Aligns perfectly with the message of this poem. Perhaps, a venture forth into the Quran and other well known books would be beneficial as well.
Date: 1/22/2018 8:06:00 PM
Wow heartwrenching! Leanne, such a savage and searing portrayal of child abuse. Your intimate style made me 'feel' your poem rather than read your poem and I felt this pain deep inside, psychologically and physically - heartrending. A powerful, penetrating and devastating write.. ~Susan
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 1/22/2018 9:38:00 PM
Dear Susan, it is never easy for anyone to write about these things, let alone discuss them. Children need to be fully educated with open forums in schools, church, community, family for discussion. ALL children need to know that there are people who will believe the stories they tell and that there are truly good people who will listen and protect them. If that 2nd boy in the story had been listened to, perhaps his course in life could have been averted. The children need to know, there is power in TRUTH, it will set them free. Thank you for taking the time to read.