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Blue Bell

Perennial birth Winter swiftly passing , ago A glimpse awaits praise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/23/2015 11:45:00 AM
a darling wait, to see this bloom
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Date: 8/6/2014 9:27:00 PM
Rick,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:31:00 AM
Hi there I am so glad we understand each other now and are back to being friendly! Line 1 is fine, line 2 is fine (you don't need the ago)& you need your ... at the end of the linePUT blue bells await praise as line 3 (remember no titles in haiku, jusy slip line one in the title slot ...perennial birth) Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2010 7:40:00 AM
Haven't seen the "blue bell" yet, Rick, but the "blue bonnets" are now blooming in Florida. These wildflowers return each spring, even after harsh winters. And they're such a welcome sight. Enjoyed your haiku! Love, Carolyn
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