Blue Bell

Perennial birth Winter swiftly passing , ago A glimpse awaits praise

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:45:00 AM

a darling wait, to see this bloom

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2014 9:27:00 PM

Rick,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/11/2010 5:31:00 AM

Hi there I am so glad we understand each other now and are back to being friendly! Line 1 is fine, line 2 is fine (you don't need the ago)& you need your ... at the end of the linePUT blue bells await praise as line 3 (remember no titles in haiku, jusy slip line one in the title slot ...perennial birth) Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/12/2010 7:40:00 AM

Haven't seen the "blue bell" yet, Rick, but the "blue bonnets" are now blooming in Florida. These wildflowers return each spring, even after harsh winters. And they're such a welcome sight. Enjoyed your haiku! Love, Carolyn