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Temptation's broom sweeps the teardrops from my damp eyes before gouging them

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Date: 8/20/2023 11:56:00 AM
Oh goodness. Reminiscent of Jesus' words. Nice senryu shiraz
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Shiraz Bautista
Date: 8/20/2023 4:05:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Glad you enjoyed this.

Book: Shattered Sighs