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Blackbird

Drape over lonely hours, gloom of night The silence that succumbs me takes its toll I am left with stardust shed from starlight Words behind me, left as ink upon my scroll You're still inside my heart, marksman of my soul Stillest ocean wrath, black by moon's allure The blackbird dips to brush the water's drone Her wings spread wide and mind set free and pure No two-legged demons here to throw a stone She flies into the seaside night alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/6/2013 12:47:00 PM
You have captured some stunning images in your piece, a wonderful read. Has the darkness and light that makes it a thrilling read. Well done, I look forward to reading more of your work now that I have found this gem.
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Date: 4/17/2013 8:57:00 AM
Eerie & intense. This was absolutely spectacular!
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Date: 4/16/2013 5:30:00 PM
I'm honored to have read this masterpiece, for you will one day be a well published author of poetry, if you aren't already! If you are I would love to buy a book of your poetry, I am most impressed with your awesome talent! I loved reading this incredible piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/16/2013 3:01:00 PM
So nice to hear from you again lovely form the dizain, fav line above [No two-legged demons here to throw a stone She flies into the seaside night alone] Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2013 2:56:00 PM
Hello Dana'Lynn, dreamy and amazing lines. The imagery is perfect. I love the deep and darken feeling of no distress when taking this lonely flight. I love this line the most ----> "I am left with stardust shed from starlight" a little alliteration found in the poem... awesomely done ~xox~PD
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