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Black Rain Haiku's

a cautious prelude- building in great rhapsody...... the dark rain performs! black as midnight drown whipping clouds swell with intent...... thunderous rain falls!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 4:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 10:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with these fine haiku poems.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 6:13:00 AM

Hi Rick - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/20/2011 2:43:00 PM

majestic imagery! Congrad's Light & Love

The Situation

Date: 1/18/2011 7:31:00 PM

congradulations on your win. T. S.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/18/2011 1:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:23:00 PM

I especially liked that first one, Rick. very well deserving of a high rating AND a contest win. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:21:00 PM

Congratulations onthe well deserved win in the contest, Rick

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 12:40:00 PM

Super Haiku set Rick, loved it. Most deserved of it's placing in Skat's contest....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Rick. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:49:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry my friend... way to go ... your talent shines once again.. enjoy another top tenner today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest ^Rick, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/17/2011 4:04:00 AM

Rick, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;) WN

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2011 3:06:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your big win in this contest!

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:29:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2011 1:10:00 PM

ooh, cool musical references. Nicely done!! Luv,Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/15/2011 8:59:00 AM

I can hear that rain pounding away, Rick-- I am enjoying reading the entries for this contest (goes so well with the weather) I think I will be reading your name in the winner's circle :) thanks for dropping by my poems :) -- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 8:34:00 PM

Great job with the contest Particularly that last one, Rick! Love the imagery.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/14/2011 6:45:00 PM

Oh wow....another winner for you!! (love the line whipping clouds swell with intent....that is excellent ...really excellent!!)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 2:47:00 PM

well done Rick,, dark,, enjoyed your poem,.good luck,.p.d.

The Situation

Date: 1/14/2011 11:35:00 AM

Good luck in the contest. T. S.