Beauty In Decay

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like crunchy cornflakes gold leaves rustle under foot beauty in decay

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/27/2023 8:10:00 PM

A great mixture of images from corn flakes to fallen golden leaves in disarray. Fine writing here. Have a bountiful fall. Brian

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/14/2023 6:30:00 PM

Ha, ha! Crunchy cornflakes! Tony the tiger sure gave me tooth decay back in the day (with his crunch cornflakes!). :) gw

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/15/2023 4:03:00 AM

Tony was my nemesis as well... :-) Ha!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/14/2023 5:04:00 PM

Dear Sara, your lovely sensory imagery brings this Fall haiku to vibrant life! I love walking through crunchy Autumn leaves. Indeed, there is beauty in Nature's decay. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/14/2023 7:20:00 AM

Crack crackle and pop. Reborn in the arms of love. Excellent write!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/14/2023 7:44:00 AM

thank you, Joe, for stopping by and for commenting on my latest Haiku. Enjoy your day, Sara

Paul Bell

Date: 9/14/2023 6:14:00 AM

It was good, well it lasted. Still, no grass cutting.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/14/2023 7:44:00 AM

I had to laugh, Paul. That's exactly the way my hubby feels--no more crass cutting. Thanks for stopping by, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/14/2023 4:08:00 AM

I can hear them and the feel of Fall is apt! Very nice!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/14/2023 4:17:00 AM

thank you for stopping by, Kim. Yes, fall has such a unique feel to it. Enjoy your Thursday, Sara