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Written for contest ---
nothing is perfect about the face posture needs adjustment blemished mind and body refinement considerations overdue yet, she walks in beauty speaks and sees smiles that her presence brought her mind wants to disregard stamp out in case it's wrong but it's true she's wallpaper saying things that drift away unnoticed or an irritation knowing it deep down it's true but not defining just context as she dances in the moments of existence she is all the things that beauty is and it flows around her and captures others captivatingly fleeting what is beauty if not a transient moment a taste experienced briefly on the tip of the tongue to make you salivate and want more of the inexplicable that disappears should you linger but fills dreams then confuses memory as the search starts for something that's always there

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Date: 9/11/2023 12:15:00 AM
Dilly, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Date: 9/11/2023 12:45:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/26/2023 9:56:00 PM
"what is beauty if not a transient moment a taste experienced briefly on the tip of the tongue to make you salivate and want more of the inexplicable" - Great definition. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/26/2023 11:05:00 PM
Many thanks :)
Date: 8/22/2023 3:03:00 PM
This was gorgeous writing; so much meaningful truth!
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Date: 8/22/2023 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Paige, I'd considered ditching this one, I'd liked it when I wrote it but then thought perhaps it doesn't make sense, so it's nice to get your comment x

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