Awaiting Dawn

-()- awaiting dawn the crisp cool air surrounds- I entangle her flesh -()- A Modern Haiku Contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/5/2011 2:48:00 PM

good luck there Obewan Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2011 2:53:00 PM

Passionate write, Rick I'm imagining you out camping with your special lady as dawn approaches.. Best wishes in the contest~ I hope you'll write for my contest as well. There doesn't seem to be much interest but one of the best I've received is just four lines. Love, Carolyn

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/2/2011 11:35:00 AM

Basic easy and good write..!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 1:10:00 PM

Magnificent haiku ^Rick. Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. They are very much appreciated. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/29/2011 10:36:00 PM

...the heat of the flesh in the crisp, cool of night...great sensation, great contrast...for sure a winner in the contest!!!