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This morning, I discovered a small trail leading off one of the main trails that I frequently walk. I shielded my eyes and looked deep into the woods but wasn’t able to see the direction of the trail. I listened closely and heard the giggling water of a nearby brook. The trees gentle rustled beckoning me, “Embrace the moment. Follow the trail. Follow it wherever it might lead.” I stepped forward and meandered my way down the small trail. A rug of golden-browns and a shelter of extended limbs resting beneath foliage hues greeted me. I sat down on a tree stump, closed my eyes, and listened as the peaceful water brought tranquility to my soul. Life flows like a stream, Ever-changing, never still, Embrace each moment.

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Michael Maul

Date: 10/15/2023 1:31:00 PM

I like this piece very much. The sound of a stream can put you in such a blissfull place - spiritually and psychologically.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 2:13:00 PM

thanks for stopping by and walking leisurely with me. You're right about the sound of a stream...I feel connected to something beyond me in those moments. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/15/2023 11:39:00 AM

I absolutely adored the leisurely stroll you took along the winding path that followed the gentle flow of the brook. The way you described yourself sitting on a smooth, moss-covered rock, fully immersed in the symphony of the brook's gurgling melodies, truly serene moment. Once again, dear Sara, you have crafted a piece that effortlessly captures the essence of nature's beauty and evokes a sense of profound appreciation.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 1:13:00 PM

I'm grateful, Sotto, that you accompanied me on my leisurely stroll and sitting with me whilst I sat on a rock. It was a serene moment I actually experienced. Your words give me confidence...I appreciate you beyond words. Have a blessed Sunday, Sara

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 7:46:00 AM

Is this a true story my friend and did Bob go with you? You must write these whilst having breakfast, as you do them so well.. you should write a novel.. or, maybe you already have several? I jut love how your words paint a picture and I can see the command of your English language is on a very high level... and love the haiku at the end..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 1:11:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Silent One. Yes, this is a true story and, yes, Bill accompanied me. I love your comments and suggestions. I do write early in the morning--I'm the only awake and I'm able to write more clearly. Yes, I've written one novel (unpublished) as well as a collection of memoir vignettes. I'm grateful you appreciate my need to paint pictures with words--something my mom taught me. I'm glad you liked the Haiku...and English was one of my college majors. You figured me out :-) smiles & enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2023 7:07:00 AM

Good advice in the writing and the haiku. I can't walk very far anymore which is very upsetting to me, but I am still walking in life, and like Robert Frost I have learned about life it goes on. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 7:08:00 AM

thanks for your thoughtful words, Sara. I love to walk and walk most mornings. Yesterday somehow I strained a calf muscle so I won't be able to walk for several days. BTW, Frost is one of my favorite poets...Have a great day, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/15/2023 5:53:00 AM

“Embrace the moment. Follow the trail. Follow it wherever it might lead.” Lovely, inspiring writing, Sara. The never ending story of existence. We need only follow the infinite trails, as many different as their are people. With soulful commitment, never lacking in miracles.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 7:00:00 AM

thanks for stopping by Joe and for your words....we need only follow the trails, the never ending story of existence. Beautiful comment...have a wonderful day, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/15/2023 3:57:00 AM

Brilliant reminder, that’s exactly what im doing today, embracing the moment, embracing little things, as theres so much in life that we can appreciate if we take a minute to do so. I love the way you’ve written this haibun in such a descriptive manner. So soothing and so magical. Especially the giggling water of nearby brooks and your use of colors that shows us this trail. How stunning! Seamless flow too! You have a way with words. And the haiku sums up everything so eloquently! Impeccable

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 7:02:00 AM

thank you, dear Ink, for your kind words. I, too, am slowing down today embracing the moments. Sometimes I move and do way too fast and do too much. :-) I appreciate your thoughtful comments and am grateful you see behind and within my words. Have a peaceful Sunday, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2023 2:31:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful, both prose and haiku. You are the few best around. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 7:02:00 AM

ahhh...thank you Victor. I'm grateful for your continued visits and for your encouraging comments and words. You make my day. Have a pleasant Sunday, Sar

Valsa George

Date: 10/14/2023 10:22:00 PM

Enjoyed your meandering along the trail of the brook.Sitting by its side on a rock, listening to its gurgling music and enjoying the surrounding calm is an experience to be cherished. Loved the haiku at the end. As ever, a lovely haibun, dear Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 7:04:00 AM

thanks, Valsa, for meandering along with me soaking up the calmness. I'm grateful for your kind comments and appreciative nature. Have a wonderful Sunday, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/14/2023 8:26:00 PM

I enjoyed thr poem and the philosophy of enjoying each moment. I felt the freedom of nature as I read it.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 7:04:00 AM

thank you, Hilda, for your lovely comment. I appreciate you enjoying the freedom of the walk with me. Have a great day, Sara

Stephan McBride

Date: 10/14/2023 4:42:00 PM

Love it, what a peaceful and soothing poem: )

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/14/2023 4:57:00 PM

thanks, Stephan, for stopping by and taking the time to comment. Glad you found the poem peaceful and soothing. have a wonderful evening, Sara