Autumnal Delights

leaf covered sidewalks pumpkins ready to harvest mornings bring us frost

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Michael Maul

Date: 9/24/2023 5:33:00 PM

Very short, but sweet. Great job.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/25/2023 4:16:00 AM

thanks, Micheal, for stopping by and for making such a 'sweet' and kind comment. Enjoy your day

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2023 3:11:00 PM

Each line an image of autumn. Beautifully described, Sara. Pleasant as autumn!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 3:44:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay, for your fine comments. I appreciate you taking the time to stop by. 'pleasant as autumn...' I liked that. enjoy your evening Sara

Silent One

Date: 9/24/2023 12:28:00 PM

You described so much in the 17 syllables of a haiku.. as always wonderful imagery and you do this form so well..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 12:56:00 PM

thank you, dear 'Silent One,' for your kind words. I appreciate your stopping by and taking the time to comment.

Arastu Goyal

Date: 9/24/2023 10:45:00 AM

Loved reading this Haiku! Very vivid and reminds me of the great October. Through your poem, I was able to see the sidewalks covered with dust and leaves, pumpkins bulging as if they were about to pop, and a bit of snow that might come. Nicely written, -AG

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 12:57:00 PM

Thank you, AG, for stopping by. I appreciate your comments. I'm glad you found it engaging. Thank you for the positive feedback, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 9/24/2023 9:50:00 AM

A few words and a descriptive image of an Autumn morning. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/24/2023 12:58:00 PM

thanks, hubby, for stopping by and always supporting me and my creative efforts. du bist der Beste!