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Astrophilia

When mother asked me what I dreamed of becoming, I never thought I’d say: an astronomer. But here I am: hair undone, in a wine-blotched slip tracking you, the moon around my earth. I didn’t plan on this, but I know I’m doomed to be fascinated by how the nebula behind you quietly blossoms—It ignites your hair, which I’ve imagined to be velvet against my fingers. I will spend my life in awe of the chartless shades no spectrum dares name —They bring out the flare in your eyes when you laugh at the stars’ jokes. I could get closer—but no Astronomers watch from afar We chart, not touch We name stars we'll never hold Closeness ruins, as observed: the moment the lens becomes a touch— the stars collapse into lovers’ arms. I know your colors: forest green on weekdays, purple when you’re aching for reinvention; I know the crackle in your voice when you listen to 80s vinyl alone at 2 a.m. I collect your habits like constellations— not mine, but I transcribe them between my gospel and tears

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Date: 7/19/2025 5:17:00 AM
i really enjoyed reading this, what a talent! congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 7/19/2025 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Charlotte <3 Your words warmed my day
Date: 7/17/2025 10:32:00 AM
I love this poem! Fave! I will be reading this again and again! Xo
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 7/17/2025 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Crystol! <3 Your words mean a lot.
Date: 7/16/2025 5:49:00 PM
Jasmine you're so good. Thank you for entering and congrats on placement
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 7/19/2025 5:17:00 AM
she's a v good writer - unique
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 7/17/2025 2:45:00 AM
Thank you, Tom <3

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